God, LK Joshi and elusive novel title
Title of the novel will forever elude me unless I bump into
Lalil Kumar Joshi some day, some place in life. However, message of the novel
will remain forever with me. It is not that LK Joshi is untraceable but to ask on
email or phone what is title of the novel he had discussed with me two decades
ago would be a sheer tomfoolery. Anyway, the message is more important than the
title.
As any senior journalist worth the salt in Bhopal will vouch, Lalit Kumar Joshi was one
of the finest IAS officers Madhya Pradesh has ever had. As public relation
commissioner he set certain high standards which none of his successors could match.
He could talk to top most media baron and a cub reporter simultaneously without
giving either a feeling of being discriminated against.
In an evening in 1992, I was chatting with LK Joshi in his
office about literature. A voracious reader, Joshi used to read three books at
a time (not simultaneously, of course). I mentioned during discussion about
huge problem in rewriting reporters stories which besides being horrible
English lack basic facts. He laughed consolingly and mentioned a novel he had
read some time ago.
The novel’s protagonist is a sculptor. Passionate and
eccentric, he chisels out from a rock a huge statue of a human figure on the cliff
of a hillock. On the other side is a deep valley. Having completed the statue,
he invites his friends to see his creation. They come and marvel at the artiste’s
labour of love.
They observe that the artiste has taken equal pain in
shapely carving out the back part of the statue as the front. “Why have you
worked so hard on the back of the statue which no body will see because beyond
the cliff is the valley. You are mad. Who will bother to see the back?”
wondered one of the friends while admiring the statue.
The artiste paused for a while and looking skyward quietly
replied, “The god will see.” The way Joshiji narrated the story touched the
core of my heart.
I had not realised how deeply the story influenced me until
a reporter asked the same question that the artiste’s friend had asked. The
context was, of course, different. For 20 years, I have been rewriting copies
of the reporters, even though I was essentially a reporter myself and late
bureau chief. Somehow, I can’t suffer bad English. Or, at least what I think is
bad English.
I had finished rewiring the reporter’s shabbily written
story. There was some factual mistake in the last paragraph. I checked with him
about the fact. He corrected it but not without adding rather blithely, “Arre
Sir, who is going to read this till the last?” I instinctively blurted out, “The
god will read”. I wondered what might have prompted this reply. Then the LK Joshi’s story flashed on the mind.
Since then, the narration often haunts me whenever I edit stories.
My aversion to let go badly written stories in the print has
not been appreciated even by some of the reporters who should have been, in
fact, grateful. I also sometime argue with myself whether is it not true that few,
if any one, read stories in English newspapers beyond second para unless they
are spellbinding. But such spellbinding stories are mostly carried on page one. Inside page stories
go mostly unread. Most readers even don’t take trouble of unfolding the paper.
But, LK Joshi’s novel makes me feel guilty if ever I let any
story in hand go unedited till the last word. I am not fanatic. My inclination to
religiosity is fairly recent. Yet, any half hearted attempt or disingenuous tricks
in the paper flusters me. I have paid heavy price for being stubborn on this
count. But what to do ? Ye Dil Hai Ki Manata Nahi.
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